PRACTICE WRITING IELTS
PRACTICE WRITING IELTS
Topic: Although it is generally prohibited, corporal punishment persists in many families.
Do you think corporal punishment is an acceptable way to regulate children’s behaviours?
The matter of choosing a suitable measure to teach children has always sparked a controversy over its impacts on forming manner and characteristic of teenager in the contemporary society. It is believed by some that corporal punishment is regarded as an effective way to lecture their children. As opposed of this trend, I hold a position that physical punishment takes its tolls not only on physical appearance but also emotion of adolescents.
We should first recognise that physical harm is attributed to the accumulative corporal punishment that children mostly suffer. It is evident that many parents encourage spanks as method of discipline without concerning of how hard they hit their children to penalise them when they commit a mistake. From then, adolescents have eventually undergone some physical injuries, which seems to be an inevitable outcome in many instances.
Apart from physical harm, we cannot turn a deaf ear to the fact that corporal punishment has been regarded as the facilitator of killing emotion. A mounting evident is that a great deal of children who are exposed to experience constant physical punishment are likely to suffer from a wide range of emotional harms including depression, anxiety and even losing their own sense of happiness rather than their peers. Even worse, most of them have been struggling with a host of adversities in either exploring new things or being creative individual due to the fact that they frequently put all their attempts to complete things under their parents’ permission.
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