IELTS Writing: Bài mẫu Writing Task 1 (AC) – Line Graph

Bài hôm nay sẽ là về IELTS Writing Task 1 (AC), đề bài sẽ yêu cầu các thí sinh viết bài essay miêu tả/so sánh biểu đồ (biểu đồ cột/tròn/line) hoặc bản đồ hoặc một quy trình nào đó. Đối vời từng loại biểu đồ sẽ có các từ vựng, ngữ pháp riêng để bạn có thể nhận xét và giúp bạn đạt được điểm cao khi đi thi.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph below provide information about the incomes of four restaurants in a city in 2010
Summarize the information, write at least 150 words.

IELTS academic writing task 1 India

Sample Answer:

The line graph provides information about the amount of money which was earned monthly by four restaurants in a city in 2010.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were considerable upwards trends in the income of Delicacy, Evening paradise and Grand Fiesta, while the earnings of Spicy Fortune witnessed a considerable fall over the year. Another interesting point is that Spicy Fortune was the most popular restaurant in January, but in December, Evening Paradise earned more money than the others

Looking at the details, in January 2010, Spicy Fortune was the biggest earner with a monthly income of almost $160,000. In the following months, its earnings first fluctuated and then declined steadily before ending at nearly $50,000 in December.

In contrast, the monthly incomes of other three restaurants went up by varying degrees. There was a rise in Delicacy’s earnings over the first ten months, followed by a sudden increase to $120,000 in December. Grand Fiesta and Evening Paradise started with significantly different figures in January, about $100,000 and $50,000, respectively. The former experienced a steady fall until June, but after that, income rose significantly to just under $140,000 in December. Likewise, the trend for Evening Paradise was upward. From January to July, earnings doubled from about $50,000 to nearly $100,000 and ended the year with the highest income of around $190,000.

**IELTS Tip: Một số gợi ý hữu ích để diễn tả sự tăng giảm:

  • to experience a(n) [increase/decrease/rise/fall/drop in/of]
  • to [increase/decrease/rise/fall/drop by/from … to]
  • to fluctuate / undergo a change / remain [stable/steady] / stagnate / dip / peak / increase [twofold/threefold] / surge
  • a [less/more] marked [increase/decrease], etc. (occurred / took place)
  • [less/more] significant / steady / especially strong growth
  • a parallel [rise/fall]
  • to expect / predict / forecast
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